MARCH 2000 | VOL. 4, NO. 3 FICTION RECENT FICTION UP NEXT SHARON LAFRENZ, a native of Portland, Oregon, is new to the Internet and "comparatively new to the writing world." She recently had her first story accepted for publication. A resident of Calgary, Alberta, LaFrenz is a contributing writer to Renaissance Online Magazine.
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MOONLIGHT ON LAKE LOTSAHOOCHI At the beginning of the story, Maxine had called Graham "a hunk a'
sizzlin' meat," but added that he'd been a real gentleman, too. Trina
had been patiently waiting for Maxine to get to the sizzling details.
"So what happened?" she asked again, as Maxine sat staring at her
own reflection in the mirror behind the bar. "Huh?" said Maxine. "With the guy, Graham," Trina said. "What happened?" "Whadda ya mean?" Trina dropped her head to her chest in exasperation, then looked at
Maxine. "I mean, what happened! For Chrissake, Maxine! You been
tellin' me about meetin' this guy -- this Graham, at some lake ...
remember?" Maxine looked like she was trying to remember. "Well ... we were in
the water. 'N it was like ... so warm 'n ... nice. The night smelled
sweet. Real sweet. It was the honeysuckle. Grows aaaall around the
lake, eh?" Maxine's eyes were beginning to glaze over, the lids drooping. Her
mouth hung open as she stared at Trina in the semi-darkness. "You don' believe me, do you?" she said. "Should I?" countered Trina. "Who ever heard of a Lake
Lotsa-hoo-chi? You are so full of it, Maxine! I dunno why I hang out
with you. There wasn't no Graham, was there? No group a' nice, polite
guys and girls, no honeysuckle --." "There was so, goddammit!" Maxine shouted. Heads turned, and Ruby
came to where Trina and Maxine were seated. "Hey, you two," she said. "Remember what I told you? You either
behave, or do your drinking elsewhere, understand?" Maxine fell forward against the bar, one hand holding her glass
practically on its side, the other splayed flat on the bar top. "Who the hell are you to be bossing us, eh?" she snarled at Ruby.
"You ain't no better --" Trina took hold of Maxine's arm, gently restraining her, and said to
Ruby, "Sorry. We understand. No trouble, no trouble." Ruby worked her jaw back and forth while studying Maxine. Two pairs
of black eyes stared straight into each other as Wynonna's sultry voice
crooned to the near empty room. "Good," Ruby said, then went back to her conversation with the old
man. Maxine whined, "I don' wanna get thrown out in that witch-tit
weather, Trina. Be nice, okay?" "Me be nice? You're the one causin' a ruckus!" "That little shit," said Maxine, ducking her head and darting her
eyes toward Ruby. "She's not no better 'n us!" "Never mind. She'd the one behind this counter. So keep it down,
eh?" "You make me get mad!" Maxine whispered. "You're supposed to be my
friend! You're supposed to listen to me 'n believe me!" "Well," Trina grumbled, "you just quit tellin' all them lies. Why
do you do it? You're always lying, Maxine." Both hands wrapped around her glass, Maxine stared into the last
dregs of amber liquid, shrugged her large, sloped shoulders and said, "I
dunno." After a moment, she glanced at Trina and said stubbornly, "But
there is a Lake Lotsahoochi. 'Sup north somewheres. Lots a' mosquitos
... but on the nights when there's a big ol' white moon, then the
fish -- lots of 'em, 'n big, too -- they leap up outta the
still water 'n gobble up all the bugs. Then it's not so bad, eh? People
could go skinny dippin' 'n not get eaten up by all the bugs, you know?"
Trina bobbed her head slightly, one side of her mouth turning up a
bit as she reached out and gently brushed a strand of hair from her
friend's face. "What kinda fish?" she asked.
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